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November 20th, 2015, 8:37 am

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Reply HikiAoi, November 20th, 2015, 8:37 am

im not really satisfied with travis' angle in the first panel aaa//

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Reply hamelenolilo7, November 20th, 2015, 9:08 am

@HikiAoi: mmm maybe you got the neck's shadow a bit wrong. Maybe (I'm not a drawer, sorry T-T) you shouldn't have done a shadow on his trapezius?
Anyway (to answer to your comment on the other page too) I think your comic is nice also because it's so simple and clean, talking about its drawings. People love kindness and sweet characters, don't worry <3

Reply HikiAoi, November 26th, 2015, 9:46 am

@hamelenolilo7: ah!! i can see that-! thank you for pointing that out/// ahh i'll try my best-!

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